In Honor of My Mom

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    • I know I shouldn't be allowed to post on this site compared to soo many of you. Many of my friends on here are much better poets than I can ever dream of and I thank everyone of you who read and comment on my childish things and I apologize for my poems I know they are not good.

    In Honor of My Mom

     I can feel the darkness spreading.
    The cage is no longer holding it back, it's attacking.
    Attacking the light, the happiness, it's burning me.
    The fires of hell burning away the happiness, spreading and destroying.
    The day is coming once a year its strongest, destroying everything.
    Everything can be "ok" until this day blackness swallowing everything.
    Destroying and swallowing the happiness because despair no longer living.
    5 years living without the reson for my existance leaving.
    Leaving me behind leaving pain behind in a better place no longer dieing.
    Kind, Nice, Caring, Loving, My Mother, Truly Amazing.
    You are deeply missed I'm sorry i didn't grow up sooner, leaving.
    Leaving you to gods wrath and cruel punishment.
    Punishing you for me not growing up god punished you for me now losing.
    Losing you for ever, losing light, losing my life without you here to guide me

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    inkmaster commented on In Honor of My Mom

    12-05-2010

    Nice write.....i liked it.....Jeff..........a 10 from me!!!!~
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    TheDreamWalker

    12/08/2010

    Thanks Jeff =)

    Teardrops commented on In Honor of My Mom

    11-16-2010

    In 2003 i lost my husband on Fed 28 th my mother on March 18 2003 so i know where you are . One thing its not your fault nothing you said or did caused this . You worte a great poem Marie
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    TheDreamWalker

    11/16/2010

    Thank you Marie and I also lost a man who i felt as a brother in August the same year to suicide

    MindNumbing commented on In Honor of My Mom

    11-16-2010

    Oh Mel... I'm so sorry you're going thru this. It's hard to lose a parent, that much I know. But you can't blame yourself. Stay strong, and you'll see that she's still right there next to you, guiding each and every step. She's still in your heart and you still have all the values that she gave to you all those years ago. Hang in there, my friend **hugs**
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    TheDreamWalker

    11/16/2010

    **hugs** thank you so much! It's just so hard not to blame myself to not be the reason for punishment....Thank you for commenting

    bandit1192 commented on In Honor of My Mom

    11-15-2010

    I can feel the pain through your words. At 14 that's quite a lot to deal with. Eventually, you'll come to realize it wasn't anything you did or didn't do. Keep her in your heart and hold on to the memory of a truly amazing MOM. Sorry for your loss. TS
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    TheDreamWalker

    11/16/2010

    Thank you I try and keep hold of her but I feel as tho I lose a little bit more or her each day......Ang thank you so much for commenting

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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