how couldn't he know?

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    • I know I shouldn't be allowed to post on this site compared to soo many of you. Many of my friends on here are much better poets than I can ever dream of and I thank everyone of you who read and comment on my childish things and I apologize for my poems I know they are not good.

    how couldn't he know?

    I'm in love with a friend, how couldn't he know?
    Open your eyes and find your surprise!
    Here I am arms wide open, are you going to say no?
    We can be together to cuddle and watch the sunrise!
    Are you afraid we won't work?
    We won't know unless we try!
    Don't be a silly scaredy dork!
    Worse you can do is break my heart and make me cry!
    I'm your friend until the end of time!
    Lets leave it up to fate!
    Can't we be more? Let's flip a dime!
    Let the dime choose if we date!
    I'm in love with my friend how couldn't he know?

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    MindNumbing commented on how couldn't he know?

    11-16-2010

    Guys don't see subtle hints, or hints at all for that matter. They only comprehend things that are broken down, word for word, with no riddles or uncertainty attached. Tell him exactly how you feel. If he feels the same way, you'll get what you're looking for. If he doesn't feel the same, at least you'll know that you still have the friendship :)
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    TheDreamWalker

    11/16/2010

    =) thanks I try to and he's just so frustrating *sigh* men I tell ya....lol thank you for commenting

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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