I miss you

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I wrote this about my first girlfriend I ever had that broke up with me after dating her for two years... I miss her, and I hope you somehow read this my dear. I miss you in my life <3

I miss you

,and page after page
reading those lines
with your handwriting engraved inside of my mind
telling stories of memories we had together, and
the promises we made of staying together, forever    
The laughs and the smiles
that always lit up our faces
were also in company with some frowns and dark places, and
when the silence was deafening
those moments said everything, that we couldn't say     
Honestly I miss those days
Where the only thing that made me smile was seeing your face, and
how we always knew how the other felt underneath all the pain
Honestly I miss how you make me feel like singing out loud
When the smell of your perfume put my head in the clouds, and
though it’s not about our feelings, girl, you know they have there place, and
Honestly I miss how it used to be
When it was You and Me

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BrokenHeart2009 commented on I miss you

08-16-2011

I agree it flows beautiful and full emptiness for the lost love and what use to be.

lonelyboy77

08/28/2011

Thank you!

kmfreshh commented on I miss you

08-14-2011

I really like the style this is written in. Heartfelt and a nice flow, i enjoyed reading it

lonelyboy77

08/28/2011

Thank you so much!

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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