I can't...

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    I can't...

    This has to be done alone.
    noone can help me, I'm in this myself.
    I'm stuck with no answer,
    not even the problem is known.

    I have all the time I could need
    but it's not nearly enough
    how do I repay,
    the bitter taste of greed.

    this will never end
    I was hurt so badly
    I can't forgive,
    my closest friend...

    me.

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    Utopia666999 commented on I can't...

    03-22-2009

    aww hun sad poem, liked it but sad..

    janetdawson commented on I can't...

    03-22-2009

    very understandable

    sk commented on I can't...

    03-21-2009

    Your poems seems to twist at the end, yet you don't do it just for effect; Very interesting style...

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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