Good Night

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Good Night

Love's like
a starry night
last night
it was cloudy outside
that's life 
and I'm stuck inside
turn out the lights
I wanna see the skies
lost sight
open up the blinds
that's right
I wanna see all kinds
of lights
up in the sky
I close my eyes 
after so many tries
and find
a place to hide
and remind
myself I tried
to unwind
but I know I'm not fine
so I look to the skies
and see the sun rise
good night

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knight4696 commented on Good Night

02-06-2010

You certainly do have your own style - nice work.

Paradice21 commented on Good Night

12-07-2009

This was A very Nice poem! And One of my favs of yours!

Hathor4Wine commented on Good Night

12-02-2009

lol...so silly...*smiles*.....l............................................................-H4W

StandingBear commented on Good Night

12-01-2009

Nice, philosophical work uniquely written. Almost sounds like a date didn't show leading to this great write. Backup Plan B! Awesome!

devaamido commented on Good Night

12-01-2009

You sure do describe the classical "booze & broads done let me down", guitar pickin' experience better than most. It's good! Let's see the rest of your repertoire...10 for this one

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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