SevenTwentySevenTen
The moon is fulland incredible and bright.
Tears fall down
the left cheek, then the right.
The beauty of the heavens
is in sight.
My grandfather
just died tonight.
SevenTwentySevenTen
4 Comments
Tags: Death
Poem Commentary
I wrote this the night my grandfather died.and incredible and bright.
Tears fall down
the left cheek, then the right.
The beauty of the heavens
is in sight.
My grandfather
just died tonight.
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Poem Comments
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stever commented on SevenTwentySevenTen
03-28-2013
- sad but true ,,just another thing to make you bluebut it will all
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cheronld commented on SevenTwentySevenTen
05-16-2012
- Short and sweet and it packed just enough of a punch to get the emotional feelings out....sorry for your loss...Cher
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xSONGBIRDx commented on SevenTwentySevenTen
09-23-2011
- This poem is very sad, yet very beautiful. Thanks for sharing!
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shakeme4life commented on SevenTwentySevenTen
07-11-2011
- I would like to see you enlargen this .. poem ... expand on the detail of the moment
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