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Can Poetry Save the Earth?

06-02-2010 at 12:55:31 PM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?

28 to 6 Earth 2.0 needs to be in the majors:

No I still think we need to PICK UP THE PACE... ya

Oh maybe, a thought here, A Druid for President??? ha

06-02-2010 at 01:12:30 PM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?

We have one now, John!shock

06-02-2010 at 01:14:30 PM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?

I like Tom Baker, that kind. lol

06-02-2010 at 07:00:22 PM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?

JLorian ... a great post!! ... i'll comment on your page ...

WS, thx for keeping count!

Balladeer ... i've had that image of the ant under the bridge in my head ever since you posted that here, lol ... WELL DONE! smile

-dh

06-03-2010 at 12:04:09 AM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?

JL, that was truly a remarkable piece of poetry.......it might not save the Earth,
but it made my day.......Thank you....

06-03-2010 at 05:16:57 PM

RHPeats' Beyond Our Blind Eyes

Here is a poem, by RHPeat, he's a poet/friend, and not only that
One great teacher, so please read, and how could you go wrong
learning from a man like him.

http://www.originalpoetry.com/beyond-our-blind-eyes


06-03-2010 at 07:45:23 PM

RE: Inspiration from a Spider

Quote:
Originally Posted by JLorian

This morning as I swept the porch
That overlooks the garden
I saw the sun reflected on the dew
caught in a spiders web
and I thought,

Well, I’m here and I have the broom
And I…

Swept the steps but kept
well around the spider’s web
which glistened between the two
stone heads of gargoyles
and a potted geranium.
And I thought,
Everyone has the right
to try to make a home;
even a spider.
Especially a spider
who spins her intricate web
which binds her intimately
to the sacred Circle of Life.
She uses what she takes and
replaces it with something usable.
She has never waged a war.
She has never known hatred.
She has never felt greed.
She does not hunger for power.
She simply builds her beautiful web
on the Path of Least Resistance
and when the Chi passes
she moves along, leaving a gift
that will be used in bird’s nests.
And I was humbled
by this humble spider
because...

She is not wasteful.
She has never broken the sky.
She has never polluted the earth.
She has never devastated the ocean.
She does not need to be bigger than she is.
She knows who she is and her place in the
grander scheme of things.
She is a spider. Her place is here.
And I felt ashamed
that I could ever have thought,
even fleetingly,
that I had any sort of right
to sweep away that web.
What can I say?
I’m only…


human.
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Lorian.

I have commented on this beautiful "free-stylistic" poetic statement of yours, i admire it didactic element, as well as it simple and convincingly sympathetic clarity..

06-03-2010 at 07:45:23 PM

RE: Inspiration from a Spider

Quote:
Originally Posted by JLorian

This morning as I swept the porch
That overlooks the garden
I saw the sun reflected on the dew
caught in a spiders web
and I thought,

Well, I’m here and I have the broom
And I…

Swept the steps but kept
well around the spider’s web
which glistened between the two
stone heads of gargoyles
and a potted geranium.
And I thought,
Everyone has the right
to try to make a home;
even a spider.
Especially a spider
who spins her intricate web
which binds her intimately
to the sacred Circle of Life.
She uses what she takes and
replaces it with something usable.
She has never waged a war.
She has never known hatred.
She has never felt greed.
She does not hunger for power.
She simply builds her beautiful web
on the Path of Least Resistance
and when the Chi passes
she moves along, leaving a gift
that will be used in bird’s nests.
And I was humbled
by this humble spider
because...

She is not wasteful.
She has never broken the sky.
She has never polluted the earth.
She has never devastated the ocean.
She does not need to be bigger than she is.
She knows who she is and her place in the
grander scheme of things.
She is a spider. Her place is here.
And I felt ashamed
that I could ever have thought,
even fleetingly,
that I had any sort of right
to sweep away that web.
What can I say?
I’m only…


human.
##############################################################################################

Lorian.

I have commented on this beautiful "free-stylistic" poetic statement of yours,in the Weekly Contest. i admire it didactic element, as well as its simple and convincingly sympathetic clarity..

Last edited by cousinsoren 06-03-2010 at 07:46:36 PM

08-26-2010 at 06:04:49 PM

Any one desire a bowl of plastic soup?

Earth 2.0 leads 29 to 6

Please wacth the video on the link below:
http://www.originalpoetry.com/america-stopped-singing-and-started-slin

08-27-2010 at 12:36:29 PM

Hampton Hits a Homerun

Hampton Hits a Homerun

Earth 2.0 Posse 29
what ever you call yourself- 6

http://www.originalpoetry.com/the-path-of-life_2

08-27-2010 at 02:08:50 PM

RE: Can Poetry Save the Earth?She Cries In Pain

well darn, it is supposed to be in the shape of a tear, but its not working here in the forums........but you can see it how it was meant on my page, please go check it out..........thanks love asha
http://www.originalpoetry.com/home/poems/view/title/she-cries-in-pain

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.