Forbidden Fruit

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    Forbidden Fruit
    Be my forbidden fruit
    For I long to taste
    What I cannot have
    Be my forbidden fruit
    And tease me
    Relentlessly
    With your colors
    Be my forbidden fruit
    I want to bite
    And lick the juice
    That flows from you
    Dripping from my lips
    The streaming nectar
    Be my forbidden fruit
    And surrender to me
    Soft, tender flesh
    Show me yourself
    And I will offer you my mouth
    Be my forbidden fruit
    For me to devour
    And when I am finished
    I will start all over again
    Let me admire your shape
    I will pick you
    From an orchard of trees
    Wash you thoroughly with my love
    And shine you with my skin
    So be my forbidden fruit
    And travel
    From the inside of my body
    To the inside of my soul

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    Chaos128 commented on Forbidden Fruit

    04-01-2010

    It's the flavor of danger makes forbidden fruit so tempting, and when you risk that danger and obtain what you desire, it makes the taste that much more satisfying. Sorry for being long-winded; just my way of saying littleonyx got skillz haha.
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    dangedmanjr commented on Forbidden Fruit

    12-10-2009

    you know how much i love to read this from you! I guess it;s true...everything IS bigger there!
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    TsadakeyahCohen commented on Forbidden Fruit

    09-29-2009

    Minds are beautiful things and yours has surely been infused with cosmic understanding.
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    SILKYTWEED commented on Forbidden Fruit

    07-21-2009

    Whoa, this is fire, and well put together, littleonyx, you sure you only 29, not that 29 is old or young, but this is some really real talk in this write....(smile) Thanks for sharing! I love this piece, good job (clapping and snapping)
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    littleonyx

    08/12/2009

    Yup--I'm sure I'm only 29...for the next few months. I'm gald you like it!

    4everboom commented on Forbidden Fruit

    05-21-2009

    wow, I like your forbidding fruit. I wonder if you had you taste of this fruit since you last posted this? very good write.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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