Come Back To Me

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  • Lost Love

    Come Back To Me
    Come back to me and touch me again
    Soothe me with your lips
    Comfort me with your touch
    Love me with your presence

    Come back to me and stay with me
    Refuse to leave without my love
    Take all I have to give
    Compel me to surrender to your tastes

    Come back to me and talk a while
    Conversations not forgotten
    Recorded in my memory's heart
    Whispers in my ears and soul

    Don't forget me in the night
    Think of me as the sun and moon
    Always present though far away
    So come back to me and touch me again

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    TsadakeyahCohen commented on #131

    10-07-2009

    You are truly gifted with the flow. Your words trigger emotions
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    jmylez commented on #131

    06-15-2009

    u are a very passionate writer "refuse to leave with out my love ' that line to me is very deep and show that this love is really from the heart..keep goin this deep
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    littleonyx

    08/12/2009

    Thank you, jmylez. Sometimes the pain is deep and the love is real, and that's just how it comes out. Thanks again!

    RHPeat commented on #131

    04-26-2009

    Come Back To Me is really well written. I liked it. I gave you an 8; I don't think you really need the (so) in the last line. I say, just pronounce it. Just say it like it is. (come back to me and touch me again) It's a strong refrain so keep it strong the way it is. I almost think you could move the (come back) lines to the end of each stanza and still have it read well also. a poet friend RH Peat
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    bforibus commented on #131

    01-21-2009

    i loved the feeling of this poem. just wish u kept singing
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    joeyoso commented on #131

    11-15-2008

    COOL STUFF
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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