Factions at the "distraction" the case against the workplace.

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    Factions at the "distraction" the case against the workplace.

    Factions at the distraction

    The Case against the work place

    While at your 40 hour distraction

    You must learn to perfect your reactions

    to those who lack understanding, and have conniving intellect

    These only seek to cause an effect

    Such folly you must learn to deflect

    The effects of these types are obviously toxic

    Though some wish they would stop it

    This has no affect on the mind of a gossip.

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    Wesa commented on Factions at the "distraction" the case against the workplace.

    09-09-2009

    I like this. Your anger and frustration comes through clearly. You'd have to check with someone who knows for sure, but I think "affect" in the last line should be "effect". Still, I like this one a lot.
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    GaryJonesHarris

    09/09/2009

    Hi Wesa thanks for your comment. I think it can go either way affect or effect, both meaning change. http://encarta.msn.com/dictionary_/affect.html.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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