Dream No More

2 Comments

Tags:
  • Love

    Dream No More

     

    Dream no more
    my darling dear
    Lean against the shoulder
    of my sin
    take me in.
    I am but a mere thought
    but as real,I can be,
    as you want.

    Give lips to me,
    please do not taunt.
    The land that lies
    beyond the sea
    is but a fantasy
    but tangible enough
    it is
    for dreamers such as we.

    Oh! sweet visibility
    lies abroad for you.
    I only hope it to be true
    this dream of mine is on cue.

    Darling, can't you
    hear me screaming?
    As my throat quakes
    and haggard lungs ache
    just answer once
    so lips will seal
    the kiss that we
    both wish was real

    Poem Comments

    (2)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    Cosmos commented on Dream No More

    06-05-2009

    Great write. I love the execution and the ebb and flow of rhyming, woven together with powerful words and a longing that comes alive through your writing. You write with such a freedom, that everytime I read one of your poems it gives me an inspiration to write something myself. I truly enjoying reading your peoms..., and I look forward to reading more. Keep em coming. =)
    Reply to Comment

    thoughtsaflame

    06/06/2009

    Thank you, again, Cosmos, for making me feel so positive about my writing. So touched that I inspire you. Your comments make my day. :o) Bj

    dustyrebel70 commented on Dream No More

    05-27-2009

    nice poem I like the rhythm in it and the flow was well thought out and executed. Sounded like someone who was in love
    Reply to Comment

    thoughtsaflame

    05/27/2009

    Thank you. I appreciate you taking time to read my scribblings. :o)

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    thoughtsaflame’s Poems (5)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    No Need For A Lie 6 06/02/2009
    Homeless 2 05/28/2009
    Inscription 2 05/28/2009
    Dream No More 2 05/27/2009
    Thoughts Aflame 3 05/27/2009
    Top of Page