Don't give up dear friend.

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    Dedicated to a dear friend PoetwithCancer. Dear friend don't give up, I'm here for you as God is. Let me help you if you will.

    Don't give up dear friend.

     When darkness surrounds you, and you can't see any glimmer of light.
    There is a hand reaching out to guide you, and a heart loving you with more love then man knows. Don't give up dear friend
    You may feel alone but God will never leave you nor forsake you.
    When you are hurting, Ask God to take your pain away.
    If things don't go your way, Don't get discouraged, Give it all to God.
    Don't give up dear friend
    However, God will not hand you everything we want, but he will provide what we need.
    Know this: God loves you and So do I.
    That dear friend is a message from my heart to yours.
    Over the years things may have gotten worse, but in the end it will be fine.
    Don't give up dear friend.
    When you lay awake at night and you feel the touch of the enemy, Rebuke him
    Don't let him get the best of you. Don't let him win.
    Pray to our father, and let the healing begin.
    Don't give up dear friend.
    Though times may get rough and your down on your luck
    Don't ever my friend Dont ever give up

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    PoetWithCancer commented on Don't give up dear friend.

    10-23-2010

    Dear precious young poet, LoveDeeply, // I will save this poem to my favorites so, as long as you leave it up, it will be on OP.com to inspire and uplift me. // Well-written, with the old-fashioned artistry of poetic diction and technique that I love the most--although I do enjoy the better examples of contemporary styles. // But, to cut to the chase, I'm not here to be a critic, not even one with praise for the talent this poem shows. I'm here as a human being, who is sometimes lonely, and often afraid, and facing the early cutting of my thread of life by something painful and terrible, a monster worse than any monster I ever saw in any horror movie. And I am here to accept with thankfulness your good wishes for me, and your caring concern. // This poem gives me, in this moment now, more courage, greater hope, and a sense of being loved. I will read this poem often, especially when things are going bad for me. This poem will be a light in the night for me. I will treasure your words for the rest of my time. // Thank you so much. ll --Love, Michael LP, Mr. Poet
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    LoveDeeply

    10/25/2010

    Dear Michael, Your worth writing it for. I lost both my parents to Cancer, and I too have suffered from it. Know your not alone, and that when you get to heaven, IN 40 years you'll meet my mom, dad, and daughter. Tell them Hi for me. And God Bless you my dear Friend, I'm always here for you. Send me and email if you'd like to chat.

    Dave89 commented on Don't give up dear friend.

    10-19-2010

    So Grate!!! :) I love the way you write. It speaks to me.
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    kpeery09 commented on Don't give up dear friend.

    10-18-2010

    Very Nice this one seems very interesting for a write, keep up the good work. I give you 10
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    abuelita1 commented on Don't give up dear friend.

    10-18-2010

    PoetWithCancer is one in a million. Thank you for writing this for him, to encourage him to turn it all over to the Lord. I've seen our Lord move in people's lives, miraculously. I'm beginning to see a miracle, here. ;)
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    abuelita1 commented on Don't give up dear friend.

    10-18-2010

    Amen! How very true! A beautiful reminder of the greatest love of all. The love of our Heavenly Father.
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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