delusion
there is a brotherhood of man---somewhere beyond a shining sea---where thoughts are pure---and souls can be seen--when i travel to that land--i wonder if i'll be--the same proud man--with the seed of discord i must bring.delusion
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06-21-2009
- Very moving and somehow in its own subtle way disturbing. I like how the last line twists and shows the delusion. ginga
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