Days
Today is the daywe take a step
to acheive are list for the day
we may drempt this day
but we will fight in that day
we will make mistakes
we will make are choices
but are days make everyday no other day.
-Tineessa-
Days
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- Tineessa
- is drinking vitimin water yumm!
Poem Commentary
Are days on earth as human beings.we take a step
to acheive are list for the day
we may drempt this day
but we will fight in that day
we will make mistakes
we will make are choices
but are days make everyday no other day.
-Tineessa-
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Poem Comments
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07-13-2009
- it was a strong decleration of mandatory. i love the circle and loops of words. it went into contradicting itself but that was hot too. good job
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07/13/2009
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