moment

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moment

Moments in are lives can
open are eyes
enough to relize
who hide and despise
there eyes
bring them to relize
there moments of pride
is a ride or surprise
that never dies.

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Teardrops commented on moment

11-30-2009

you are so right and say it so wonderfully great poem and you should keep on writing

onyxprince commented on moment

05-24-2009

I love this. You explained a deep most heartfelt discussion in very few words. Wonderful ready sweetheart.

Tineessa

07/13/2009

Thank you, i liked urs also. :D

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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