Cold Sweat

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    Poem Commentary

    This was one that was inspired by a song and work. The muse comes in some strange disguises. This is also one from my chapbook that i self-published through lulu.com

    Cold Sweat

    Chased by the moon through the halls of madness,
    No egress to be found.
    Lamentable spectres of broken dreams
    Upon both walls abound.
    From above and below
    My private demons compete.
    To see which will be able to stop
    My headlong retreat.
    Face to face with the beast, in the mist,
    I hear this sad refrain.
    "Could be those who claim sanity
    Are the ones who are truly insane."
    Will I ever escape?
    Will I ever find the way?
    I awake in a Cold Sweat
    To the light of another day.

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    writeisright commented on Cold Sweat

    05-20-2010

    I really like this one, Dman. I think, maybe, because I think I know where you were when you wrote it. It sounds very familiar to my own thoughts at one time.

    Charlie23 commented on Cold Sweat

    03-27-2010

    This is awesome! It appears you have just made my faves list with this one! What is sanity anyways?

    knight4696 commented on Cold Sweat

    03-27-2010

    Wow D'man I- I really like your style, You have quite the talent sir. Great write! :) Ken

    MarionYost commented on Cold Sweat

    03-21-2010

    NICE! I can relate, Great flow.. I have a feeling I'm gonna like the rest of your work :) All the best -Marion-

    Rhymer commented on Cold Sweat

    03-12-2010

    What a great read this one held my attention from beginning to end. Loved this line "Could be those who claim sanity Are the ones who are truly insane" 10 from me.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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