Broken

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    Broken

     Shoot an arrow through my heart
    Pull it out it falls apart
    little pieces on the ground
    all you do is stand and frown
    Now look at this mess
    the floor is all dirty
    I wont clean up this kind of garbage
    so little by little i pick up my pieces
    sweep them into a dustpan to dispose of
    sorry is all I have to say...
    as I take my pieces and walk away.

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    dancinghawk commented on Broken

    11-18-2009

    ouch, and nicely said ... wisely ... those who leave a path of destruction should not be tasked with the mending ... better to start with some fresh light ... thx for the share! -dh
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    Zenwitchfaery

    11/19/2009

    Hi thanks for the comment I was angry when i wrote that one lol it was a how could you ? so I am taking my stuff and going lol!

    FranzJ commented on Broken

    11-18-2009

    a broken heart in some nice wording - short but sweet
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    Zenwitchfaery

    11/19/2009

    thank you

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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