AS TIME GOES BYE

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    AS TIME GOES BYE

    AS TIME GOES BYE

     

    …As time goes bye

    I see once mysteries,… true reality

    I see once reality,… just fantasy

    I see life ends, as time goes bye.

     

     

    …As time goes bye

    I see light, where there was dark

    I see courage, where once were tears

     …I see beauty,  I see…as times goes bye

     

     

    I see… I feel… I touch

    Mortality…Resistance… Ideals

     Life… Wisdom … Grace

    … As time goes bye

     

    I see… I feel… I touch

    Love…Completeness…Symmetry…

    Congruence…Gentility … Elegance

    … As time goes bye

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    carynontherhine commented on AS TIME GOES BYE

    08-02-2010

    I enjoyed this. Everything happens as time goes by. Our ever changing world. I loved the see, feel and touch with love's completeness. A perfect ten!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Secretdreams

    08/02/2010

    Appreciate your comment and very grateful! Love Gloria

    Bettysrainbow48 commented on AS TIME GOES BYE

    01-15-2010

    A lot of things change in time for the good and bad.

    Rhymer commented on AS TIME GOES BYE

    12-11-2009

    Your talent is really being show cased in this write. 10 from me.

    kdarcy commented on AS TIME GOES BYE

    11-21-2009

    Well said, short, to the point and real. Thanks for sharing that, I loved it, be well, k

    mamasan commented on AS TIME GOES BYE

    11-14-2009

    Yes, indeed, your words are fraught with elegance ..... you are an elegant bard............

    Secretdreams

    11/14/2009

    Thank you

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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