sapphire starlight

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Felt like this one needed something more. Same poem "You'll Long For Me' just with a hint more and a new name. Hope you like the editions.

sapphire starlight

The warmth of summer caressing my skin;

I’m a beautiful green and dance in the wind.

I love all the splendor that summer brings;

But long for nights of a gentle autumn breeze,

The days get shorter,

The nights get longer

Wrapped up in the blanket of the night sky;

Captivated by the sapphire starlight,

Just the moon and I;

Settled in for a long, long night,

We talk of the beauty; autumn has to offer.

The bright reds and purples, yellows, oranges and browns;

Such an exquisite display you’ll see all across town.

Oh the sweet aromas;

Such warm cozy feelings;

Drifting in our heads as we lay blissfully dreaming.

You’ll look at me differently as I begin to rest;

Some would see it as melancholy I guess.

My bright shade of green slowly fading away;

The sun and the cool nights forcing me to change,

I don’t really mind it,

It’s the mixture of all these things;

That makes me feel beautiful and look forward to spring.

I’ll gracefully fall from the place I once called home;

Where I was sheltered and nurtured until I could stand on my own.

I'll miss my nights;

Just the moon and I;

Our nightly chats under the sapphire starlight,

Winter will come;

You’ll forget about me;

Its blankets of white cover my body.

The long winter months leave you chilly and worn;

You’ll long for me to bud once more.


~Cathy Pittillo

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EyesOfRain commented on sapphire starlight

09-20-2012

Ooohhh a new Poetess! Welcome to Original Poetry, I am new here myself :) This is beautiful. I enjoyed the imagery of you as a bright shade of green dancing in the wind. Very beautiful. Wonderful Poem!

cttgad

09/20/2012

Thank you Eyes for the great review and the warm welcome. Glad you enjoyed it. Looking forward to many more reviews from you. I enjoy your work as well.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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