you

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    you
    Lusciously beautiful is the love for you gleaming bright in my eyes,
    With every breath of fresh air and flaming sunrise
    Feeling ever to great to explain with a size
    Thanking God for every moment in life, every gift from our lord to me is a prize.
    As I am for you to mend your cries
    We can be together forever even after our body here dies.
    Our spirits flying freely through the beautiful blue skies!

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    BlacknWhite commented on you

    04-21-2009

    I like this a lot. Very moving.
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    MissElRene commented on you

    04-18-2009

    Great word usage, you painted vivid pictures with your words. NICE! PROPS...
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    mistyparish commented on you

    04-17-2009

    I like the spiritual connection in this. It is very good.
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    keisha47 commented on you

    04-14-2009

    i like this, if i've never read your biography, i'd think this was done professionally... :)
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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