10 commandments

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    10 commandments
    Gods rules of teaching so the light you may see
    Rule# 1 He commanded PUT NO GODS BEFORE ME!
    Rule# 2 DO NOT BOW DOWN TO A CARVED STICK OR BOARD!
    Rule# 3 YOU NEVER MISS USE THE NAME OF THE LORD!
    Rule# 4 ALWAYS KEEP HOLY DAY NUMBER SEVEN!
    Rule# 5 RESPECT YOUR PARENTS SO YOU LIVE LONG IN HEAVEN!
    Rule #6 NEVER TAKE A HUMAN LIFE!
    Rule #7 DON’T CHEAT ON YOUR HUSDBAND, NEITHER YOU WIFE!
    Then WHATS NOT YOURS, DO NOT TAKE!
    And then DO NOT CLAIM TESTOMONY ON YOUR NEIGHBOR THAT’S FAKE!
    Then rule # 10 DO NOT COVET YOUR NEIGHBOR! YOU SHOLD NOT WANT WHAT HE HAS GOT. EVEN IF YOU HAVE LITTLE AND HE HAS ALOT!

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    TREVON commented on 10 commandments

    12-14-2011

    I like these words of our commandment. It is a good write.
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    Marsink commented on 10 commandments

    11-23-2009

    I really appreciate what you've done in paraphrasing the commandments to rhyme, and not changing the inherent meaning. Excellent work!
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    keisha47 commented on 10 commandments

    04-14-2009

    wow! this is really nice. i read the Bible and i would have never thought of refrasing the 10 commandments like that.
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