Within

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    Within

    Lives filled with sorrow and regret

     If only time could give us all another chance

      Mistakes undid at last

    My tears fall for you day by day

      I dare not to say that I still feel this way

     Caught in a permanent darkness
     
      Shall light ever be seen by these eyes again?

    I walk, within these shadows

      I see only what I am allowed to

      I know not a brightness a shine that is everlasting

     I see not the world outside of me

      I walk within these cold, dark, lonely nights

    If i were to reach out, would you be the one to pull me out

     I am stuck in this quicksand that is called life

     Tell me, why should I strive

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    dominion commented on Within

    06-30-2011

    Your Poem was a desperate breath of fresh air to a life of despair seeking to find love again what a Beautiful poem write again.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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