Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

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Wow. I can't believe that I had written something happy, for once.

Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing


Looking at the sky cerulean bright
A feather falls most pristine white
A feeling once forgotten quite
Unsettles my solemn heart.

Closing my eyes, I start to sing
This light is such a wondrous thing
Wishing upon an angel's wing
My darkness starts to depart.

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Franziska commented on Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

10-16-2010

Wow, Smaffa this one didn't have death in it lol. Very nice and very touching. You should write more happy peaceful ones like this. You did a really good job.

smaffa

10/17/2010

Nah, that might ruin my rep as a POB. Lol, maybe....

EmoAlexis commented on Wishing Upon an Angel's Wing

09-22-2009

its good my friend. I think you still have that happiness, you just have to search.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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