when the bells ring

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  • Sadness

    when the bells ring
    when the bells do ring
    all do pay attention to it
    all do abide by the bell if it does ring
    everyone leaves his former work
    as the bell rings
    and it has rung for me
    it has rung at a very unfortunate time
    it has rung at a time that is not  wanted
    after making myself a wonderful home
    meeting with wonderful people
    my bell did ring
    i do have to leave my house and beautiful friends here
    coming back i will but not  regularly
    all i pack in my heart is memories
    memories of this family i did established with this people
    sadness is what i feel deep down in my heart
    yet i say to you my friends,my family
    do not forget about me so soon
    although i might take long
    i must cme back to where i started
    i must  come back eventhough  my bell rung
    poets abluesky is living but will be back
    perhaps with a different face
    perhaps,perhaps...with a different character
    but i am coming back
    but i am coming back
    eventough my bell riings
    for when the bell rings
    we do abide by it 
    whether or not we like it

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    HarverTomsson commented on when the bells ring

    07-03-2009

    Off to school, or career means when you return, much will be different. Even though there is great privilege in the ringing of your bell of opportunity, there will be loss as well. Process notes: someone else has mentioned it would improve your ratings to edit very thoroughly before posting, I agree. If your poem is a dance, don't make your reading partner stumble over obstacles on the way to syncrony. Peace.
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    MizBlaze commented on when the bells ring

    07-02-2009

    Deep symbolism here... The bell is change and change is unending. I wish you well on the new chapter of your life and joy to replace your sadness. When one door closes, or one bell rings, in this case, another always opens... We can only hope that the new door opens to a world of goodness and love... Good write.
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    rkrosa50 commented on when the bells ring

    07-02-2009

    Very heart felt and very good . I makes me feel your emotions of sadness.
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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