shadow

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    shadow

    just because your hand itches doesn't mean you should chop it off
               says my people
    but i have chopped mine off
    for it hurts me deep inside
    no one knows how it feels ,unless i
    for a poison from a snake can send me dead
    just because i gave you my heart
    doesn't mean you should toil with it
    for you left me when i need you the most
    and like shadow he did appear from nowhere
    and like flame he go in my heart (Philip)
    he put a smile on my face
    a shadow he has been
    for he has been with me for long
    and never did i noticed that he is the right one


                     to Sammia

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    laydbak1 commented on shadow

    06-27-2009

    It can be a stark awakening, this eureka of discovery in seeing something right under our noses, which has been so close, we never saw it before... Forest for the trees syndrome... A good piece....

    hattyej commented on shadow

    06-25-2009

    It is always a good thing when the shadow (the one we tend to overlook through our looking for love) finally comes into view....nice work.

    Aaros commented on shadow

    06-25-2009

    i really like this poem... the shadow and the hand chopped off is so amazing!

    WhisperingWind commented on shadow

    06-23-2009

    Sad yet beautiful...I like your style. I look forward to reading more of your future work. Keep it up!

    quise commented on shadow

    06-23-2009

    niiiiiiiice i like this poem i can visualise what your saying and how the shadow comes out of nowhere to steal the girl

    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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