what is human

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what is human

here you
asking, if i'm human
when both of us
know we are humane !

...what about this
neurotic nuclear ready
world...to zap apart
the races of
planet Earth, in delusion..

where does it all
meet and fit in-
theres a conclusion-
"the mislead want us to
push the button, destroyed,
no one wins ". Lord wins !

now you + i
know it takes love, understanding
and many other rare qualities......
              here we are- - -destine.....

      Chrisjan

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speed11935 commented on what is human

07-04-2009

"now you + i know it takes love, understanding" Oh yes, they is the key

mdpoetgirl commented on what is human

05-30-2009

I would've liked this poem more if there weren't so many typos throughout. The message is strong, but the presentation is a let down.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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Chrisjan’s Poems (43)

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Trust 0
Reflections 0
I see, do you ? 1
Later, on Earth Day 0
Who are you ?? 0
City Streets 0
To: Digikuva 0
Peace 1
Ode to Fly 0
Is humanity on the brink ? 1
As God's children (Haiku) 1
Whose to blame on Earth ? 1
I (part 4) 0
Once 1
triangle 0
nowhere today 0
for a moment 1
kiss of darkness 3
Dolores is now, Three 1
Parenting Part 3 2
Floating 2
Dear Jesus ( Haiku) 3
plant love 2
Meant to be 1
Sandy 1
until... 5
dear Lord 2
what is human 2
to; you & I- always 0
Pause in Time 0
aphrodite 1
the light in my day 0
spirit of tyme 0
i- pieces- 0
(I thought) 84's the year 0
reaching in 2
Excert of Lover # 69 0
Thoughts..was it a dream... 4
Am I alone, in a crowd ?! 3
To: Nay In Love 1
We are..........
....???
1
To: Ladybug Captain 0
Within Us All 3