Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

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    Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

     Things I do for people
    they do not ask me-
    I share willingly, i'm a fool
    little help I get back, not satisfactory.

    I don't ask anyone for much, as I re-call
    just honesty...sharing adventures-
    friendship; is what I ask out of "All"
    not half truth..no shows..alone I sit , in the future.

    Whatever happened, to a humane human ?
        
              Jan. 27, 2007
                 Chrisjan

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    jj1562 commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    12-13-2020

    "what ever happened to a humane humane" ouch. Very impactful and poignant. Your poems have a good theme but could do with a bit of meter.
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    amithissecret commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    07-25-2009

    iI am alot like that so much its like you took the words i wanted to speak and put them on ?paper? but yes the heart is free if we let it be but those who dont understand dont trust i like this poem
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    Aza commented on Am I alone, in a crowd ?!

    07-13-2009

    I am a lot like this poem. We're not fools. People don't appreciate, respect, or understand the heart because it is free
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    Chrisjan

    07/14/2009

    Each word you have written is very true ! Thank you for understanding.

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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