What I Need

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    What I Need

    I'm so exhausted, I can hardly sleep,
    I've almost lost, and my defenses are weak,
    I need a spark, to rekindle the flame,
    Inside my heart... I hope to stay sane...

    I need something more, much more than this,
    Something real and tangible, or like an angel's kiss,
    I need something deeper, much deeper than I know,
    It's hard to find love's warmth... In a world so cold...

    I need something sweeter, much sweeter than I've tasted,
    I need to find the right one, so my love will not be wasted,
    But, I have not a spark, I have not a flame,
    So I harden my heart... To deaden the pain...

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    Allwhethergirl commented on What I Need

    08-16-2009

    Keli I understand this one too. Sounds like you and I have both had our share of being beaten down by life and love!!! Hang in there, kiddo!!!
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    blanket commented on What I Need

    08-15-2009

    If I were an Angel I've give you a kiss and a spark....to lift your weary spirit...I think you need to leave us with just a bit of hope in the end...doesn't have to be much, just something to cling to.
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    GuitarMomma

    08/15/2009

    You know, you ARE right, but in reality, some days have no spark of hope in them, and the day I wrote that was one of those days. When I typed it... it was just flowing out of me.. first draft, unhindered, mind untethered, just flowing out of me... I plan on changing several I have posted... Thank you... :) You're sweet hun.

    laydbak1 commented on What I Need

    06-25-2009

    Can there be anything more real or angible, than an angel's kiss from a dream...??? For if it's not, then we must harden our heart against the black kiss of the devil...
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    Goatwrite commented on What I Need

    05-21-2009

    I like that, it flows really nice. ive come across some writers that i feel i have a connection with as far as writing goes. So i must say im a fan, O and Im Goat the Writer of the Storm, you'll see the Pictures in my Tears as Days goes by while im posting
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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