**Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

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    I wrote this in 1999, it was the first song I ever did both lyrics and music for... it's never been recorded.  I found out that the guy who was my best friend, was leaving... Without saying goodbye.  I wrote from that.

    **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)
    How can you go?
    But why should you stay?
    Leaving me all alone,
    And you say that,
    I never made.. you happy.

    I gave you my whole life,
    My time, my love, my pride, my heart...
    But you took it all for granted,
    Now you take my soul and walk away...

    I never knew that love could hurt so bad,
    I never thought my soul could die...
    I never knew that you'd leave me so sad,
    I never thought you would make me cry...
    And I don't know why...

    Now you must go, (you've got to go)
    You just can't stay here any longer,
    'Cause every moment you linger here,
    Every word you say,
    Breaks my heart,
    And makes me want you more...

    I thought you were for real,
    Not someone like who you've become,
    My love...
    So, if you're going to go,
    Please go now...
    'Cause I don't have the power,
    To say no...

    I never knew that love could hurt so bad,
    I never thought my soul could die...
    I never knew that you'd leave me so sad,
    I never thought you would make me cry...

    I never knew that love could hurt so bad...
    I never thought my sould could die...
    I never knew that you'd leave me so sad...
    I never thought you would make me cry...

    And I don't know why.....

    And I don't know why...

    Please tell me why...

    Oh, I don't know why.......



    By: Keli Danielle Rowe Woody

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    bobarobbob commented on **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

    08-18-2009

    hmm, i can almost hear the music. nice job. :o)
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    jescherr commented on **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

    08-16-2009

    Watch your rhyme scheme. The thoughts are solid. Try a little more word play. I would be curious to see you depart from words like "linger." As I say with all my comments, take it or leave it, who am I?
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    cliftondurant commented on **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

    08-16-2009

    i am sorry that you were hurt but you have to move on there is someone out there to love you good job
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    Allwhethergirl commented on **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

    08-16-2009

    I like it, Keli! I definitely understand the emotions you are expressing here. I'd love to hear the actual song!!! PS Sorry I wasn't able to read/rate your stuff till now -- the past couple of days this site has been freezing up my machine every time I log in!!!
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    EdwardVanOxon commented on **Hurt So Bad** (Lyrics)

    08-15-2009

    Very emotional piece. So much pain and hurt and answers still needed.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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