waiting

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    waiting

    Here I am

    The day that it all starts

    Just waiting to happen

    The rest of my life it all starts today

    Nothing mattered until now

    Now wen I relize itll fast foward

    Fast foward past the yestredays and tomorows I havent seen.

    I always wanted that to happen to let the scenes play out and watch

    As if I was just an ominous 3rd person no one could see.

    Here I am 

    The day I turned 18

    Waiting for it all to happen 

    because it will just that soon enough.

    So bring on the tomorows heartbreaks

    Tomorows dramatic caos and its gutter deppresion.

    Im here waiting 

    For passionate firsts and many many adventures.

    Here I am waiting,

    As I have been.

    Waiting for something or someone 

    Who's been waiting just as long as Ive been.

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    cliftondurant commented on waiting

    07-31-2009

    beautiful poem waiting on the future we don't know what tommorrow will bring some good and some bad but a lot depends on you great job
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    ladybugp commented on waiting

    07-26-2009

    nice i love it keep it up you should read one of my poems and tell me what you think
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    BlackLabel commented on waiting

    07-24-2009

    Waiting is probably the most miserable feeling, and I felt through this poem you really brought it out in a way people can relate to a lot - waiting for something big to happen in a life that sometimes seems so colorless
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    Artie commented on waiting

    07-24-2009

    Well on behalf of this adult, I would like to welcome you to the club.
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    nmedina commented on waiting

    07-22-2009

    I remember turning 18! The year I went out into independance and well, never turned back. I liked this poem. Very Hopeful.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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