The color of womanhood

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    The color of womanhood


    A little rouge makes you a woman
    Transforms your naive schoolgirl appearence
    Staining your lips and those of who kiss them
    A little rouge shows adventure
    Smeared lipstick shows passion
    A girl can act like her mother
    Applying a fresh coat of rouge to her lips
    She can change
    The scarelt color invites stares foward
    A strong fierce femininity emerging
    The iconic shade anounces to the public eye the arrival of a new found sexuality
    A little rouge makes you a woman
    So go on, apply a second coat on.
    Discover the color of Womanhood

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    wheelsal commented on The color of womanhood

    07-21-2009

    You are awesome. Wish I had more students like you. This needs tightening and a little editing. Sally
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    PRober commented on The color of womanhood

    07-21-2009

    nice.. but I'm thinkin womanhood comes in many colors...like red, blue and gold, for examples. nice poem though!
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    Dreamer123 commented on The color of womanhood

    07-20-2009

    MMMMM!!! i get what your saying hahah yea it does fit. ahhaha awesome write it talks about girl to woman. great write. keep it up.
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    bitchywitch commented on The color of womanhood

    07-20-2009

    very eloquent. I thought it was gonna take me in a hard-edged direction but it went in a very soft & reflective one. Very thought out..I can tell you were very much on the outside looking in..welcome to the tribe..
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    graceladymn commented on The color of womanhood

    02-11-2009

    Good to see you having fun with the new emerging role your entering. Thank you for sharing it brought a remembered smile from long ago.
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    chalkout91

    05/29/2009

    thats really sweet im glad you enjoyed it...its so crazy the transitions us women take in our lifes

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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