waiting for approval

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    i love when others show me the good inside of them. well actually i look for it.

    waiting for approval



    here i sit cold and shaking yelling out " save me save me!"
    my hands are frozen and hard.
    my hands are red and barred.

    "save you from what? ... yourself?"

    now i sit red with anger and frustration
    waiting for his acclamation...
    something i never get.
    but thats alright because, i look for the good in it.

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    Kingwebstar commented on waiting for approval

    12-31-2012

    Short and powerful great job. Keep writing and thanks for commenting me on my work. Nice to meet you by the way. Love Da KinG

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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