Voices

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  • Confusion

    Voices
    From here to there
    and there to here
    Which one is far
    and which one is near
    The waters do ripple
    the sky's do cloud
    The voices are giggling
    they're getting loud
    The sinking feelings
    and heavy thoughts
    Rolling thunder
    like clashing pots
    Inky black.....
    Falling back....
    Endless fear...
    Never letting you near....
    Keeping you distant....
    Showing resistance....
    From there to here
    and here to there
    Which one is far
    and which one is near.

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    Nicko7 commented on Voices

    02-20-2009

    GOOD FLOW WELL WRITTEN SUBTLE AMBIGUOUS DEEP EMOTIONALL IT WORKS ON A LOT OF LEVELS
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    heymily commented on Voices

    02-13-2009

    wicked..you're good, I love it
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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