Missing You

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    Missing You
    I woke for a moment on a
    cold dark night.
    Thinking of you, but you
    were no where in sight.
    I feel your strong warm arms
    caressing my body.
    I see your curious green eyes
    staring at me oddly.
    I reach over to run my lonely fingers
    through your dusty brown hair.
    Only to realize that you're not there.
    My heart fills with sorrow,
    while my head wishes for tomorrow.

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    jenifer commented on Missing You

    05-30-2009

    in a way that explains my life never being able to have long for long . and never having it the way i need.
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    nosyrosy81 commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    good one.....like it
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    joker88 commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    Yes you were right, very similar in meaning.
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    riceryder commented on Missing You

    02-17-2009

    short but sweet great job
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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