vacancy

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    vacancy
    what is this thrill i feel inside
    that makes me smile and hum
    what does it mean to dance and sing
    underneath your thumb
    oh floating
    soar
    faithlessness
    no more
    my heart i think is free
    or is this space
    in which i race
    a simple vacancy

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    Drivingczar commented on vacancy

    04-12-2009

    Brief and flowing! Good write!
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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