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    if
    if i saw you in a thousand years
    through blood sweat and many tears
    and offered to take away your fears
    would you take my hand

    if you looked into my heart of old
    and saw the heat and felt the cold
    but also felt the beat so bold
    would you take a stand

    then showing to you all i can
    to see that i too am mere man
    but you my love are my greatest fan
    and my soul you do command


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    bluskyinthenite commented on if

    12-18-2010

    sweet i love this little rhyme it flows with each breath you took to write. wonderful poet
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    gogant commented on if

    05-17-2010

    A lovely musical piece of poetry.......I applaud your rhyming scheme, Janet.............................................................gogant
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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