Untitled

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    Untitled

    My mother loved being pregnant with me

    Because my dad wouldn’t beat her

    While I grew and blossomed inside

     

    But the verbal abuse he couldn’t keep behind his forked tongue

    Thinking I couldn’t comprehend or hear

    The insults came everyday, no matter the occasion

    Trying to douse her fire, flicker her flame

     

    Believe me I could feel it

    The tears she shed rolled down her swollen belly

    I could feel her heart beat differently

     

    In twined in my umbilical cord was her spirit

    Sustaining me

    I suckled on that love

     

    Until the day I left that protected place

    And was handed to my dad

    He was more than happy to sever the cord between my mom and I forever.

     

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    OSBrooks commented on Untitled

    08-25-2009

    I loved the following lines: In twined in my umbilical cord was her spirit Sustaining me I suckled on that love This was the best I've read of your work so far. Take care and keep at it.

    enigmatic

    02/13/2010

    Aww, why thank you & I will keep at it!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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