Unconventional Love

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    • There is Salvation and Damnnation within the choice of words we define ourselves with.

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    You know who you are and how I feel so don't me say it or I will poke you in the eye!!! HA HA HA Just Kidding (maybe)

    Unconventional Love

     Head on his shoulder nuzzled in the crook of his arm
    The world fades away safe from all harm
    Knowing we want but don't need each other here
    makes our love that much sweeter and exceptionally rare
    I love yous and such are not words that we say
    a single touch or a kiss pushes all doubts away
    If I say babe I need you, he'd say what for?
    Your the strongest woman I know and so much more
    If he said babe I love you, your the reason I live
    I'd laugh and just tell him I have no money to give
    Yes our love is not tender or as sweet as some
    but at the end of each day I'm still sure he's the one!

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    Bobcatmoon commented on Unconventional Love

    08-07-2009

    nice read ...very to the point with nice easy flow..to show your feelings in words..I enjoyed reading this piece
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    WinterFrost commented on Unconventional Love

    07-12-2009

    The more I read about love followed by a poem about getting rid of someone... especially the same poet. I do wonder... True love? Or more of a cycle. A chemical storm in our heads circling around and around like monsoons and the dry season in India... Good luck and keep a weather eye out...
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    SEVEN commented on Unconventional Love

    07-06-2009

    Hmmm......unconventional huh?.....that maybe what I'm lookin for....now y I can't find me a gal like that?....nice write...keep'm comin...
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    cmlestrade commented on Unconventional Love

    07-06-2009

    This is a beautiful poem, full of truth and written from the heart Love ,true love has it's flaws but like you point out at the end of the day you're still there. Bravo!!
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    Mandi commented on Unconventional Love

    07-05-2009

    like it, and not even mushy... flows and easy t o read not pretentious, like some folk I give it a.....
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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