To J.

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    To J.
    Fear /of Commitment/

    To J.

    You asked me what I want. I told you.
    And nothing has changed ever since.
    You have stayed, wandering between
    feelings, bans, considerations and walls.
    Hesitance, fears and limits -
    do not go well with love.

    Just forget about them!


    On the Milky Way
     Let's go for a walk.
     

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    DennisScott commented on To J.

    06-22-2009

    I know I am not an expert but this sounds too cryptic. I think I have an idea of what you are talking about but that is what I think the problem is, I think I know. I do like the last line, it reminds me of "Lets go to Subway."
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    Mahabhava

    06/22/2009

    Actually the poem's title says it all:-)

    Mahabhava

    06/22/2009

    Thank you for the comment. Well, it is about hesitance and fear of making decisions and probably taking the responsibility for it. I have written it coming from a concrete situation and conversation, I think women know what I am talking about. If you have a question please let me know. Thank you for your time to read it. Best wishes, Mariana

    origionalmerlin commented on To J.

    04-22-2009

    ...smile... right path and a good write.. andrew
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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