Thought Process

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  • Confusion

    Thought Process
    As they wonder
    aimlessly through
    the dark halls
    of life.
    Souls of the
    thoughts roam free.
    Finding an escape,
    as they flow
    from the tongue.
    Never returning
    as they go
    living trapped as
    they become free.

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Thought Process

    06-30-2009

    you write at a level of maturity not often seen in a young man of 21........i'm humbled from your talent so subtle clear and free
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    inadv

    08/24/2009

    thank you. your comments are by far the most forth coming i have had.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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