The Wall

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    The Wall
    Hello?
    Are you listening?
    Well apparently you did't hear.
    The wall heard it always does.
    I feel closer to it than you.
    I feel alone, trapped, neglected.
    HELLO?
    I'm falling, falling
    you are fading, fading
    The love vanishing
    HELLO?
    Are you listening?
    Maybe you didn't hear
    I need help to save us.

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    orsonav commented on The Wall

    04-26-2009

    Very original style. Great Write!
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    cliftondurant commented on The Wall

    04-17-2009

    beautifully written we always need someone to listen
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    xxlheart commented on The Wall

    04-01-2009

    very original! double wow on this because it is so unique and oh btw the style is perfect. excellent write!
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    mzfair commented on The Wall

    03-30-2009

    i like your poem. it made me think of how i feel when trying to get my male friend to understand me.
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    WordSlinger commented on The Wall

    03-26-2009

    lol, nice poem reminds me when I talk to some people
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    caspiancri’s Poems (12)

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    The Wall 9 03/23/2009
    Fury Within 3 03/23/2009
    Don't Close Your Eyes 12 03/12/2009
    Lies 7 03/12/2009
    Contemplating 4 03/12/2009
    A Celebration 3 03/12/2009
    Family Love 4 03/12/2009
    We Are Three 3 03/10/2009
    Change 3 03/10/2009
    I'm Here 5 03/08/2009
    Mending 4 03/08/2009
    Inspiration 3 03/08/2009
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