Contemplating

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    Contemplating
    So you are contemplating suicide
    Have you sat and thought about
    all the hurt
    all the pain
    you will cause
    Have you contemplated what you could be
    would be
    Have you thought about getting your life together
    get a life
    get a job And STOP!
    letting others make your decisions
    you are you and they are they
    Did you hear? Who you are
    You are somebody
    NOW! Contemplate that!


    Copyright ©2009 Heather Dawn Mibroda

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    dixiemom commented on Contemplating

    03-24-2009

    very strait and to the point I liked it alot
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    xxlheart commented on Contemplating

    03-20-2009

    excellent poem. love the slam it in the face attitude of this piece. this should be required reading for all!
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    raggedypoet commented on Contemplating

    03-17-2009

    Sounds like advice from my momma who used to say "just get ahold of yourself" Nice read heather!!!
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    dangedmanjr commented on Contemplating

    03-12-2009

    nice to hear someone angry at the true cause...and not blaming everything else!!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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