the strangest notion of passion

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  • Erotic
    • stonie
    • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

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    this is about a crazy time in my life and i think alot of people won't truly understand, but for the most part the message is very blunt

    the strangest notion of passion

     You enter'd my mind like a criminal, penitraited the strongest barriers and gained access to thought that were most subliminal.

       Crazy i thought the passion you left behind, now how do you surpose i make these feeling unwind, they bind, and find that i want you more with passing time.

       do you see this as a crime? do you still want me to call you mine?

     Shrouded with the haziest of emotions, was my love for you merely a notion?

     I pushed you away and all you wanted was time, and i'm choking and running around blind.

     I never asked to find you now, but i did and don't know how.

     Don't know how to show you the real me, the me i chained up for none to see, now that i know where i want to be, could you let yourself fall for me.

    This time around i will not turn tail and flee

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