not i

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  • stonie
  • got somethi ngdeep on my mind but too busy at work to manifest it

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i actually had to read this one to remember y i wrote it, but it's actually a good thing, it's about the end of my craziness after a ex of my caused alot of stress in my life and i never really was the same after that, i ended up with the woman i am with now and the way i was messed up alot of things between us, this is about the end of all that. also it is very much influenced from nine inch nails. half my peoms probly have alittle nails influence but in this one it really shows

not i

at times things tend to go all wrong,
 you lose those that just belong,
 hold strong stay long,
 don't let me come home to find you gone.
 Yet you stay through crazy days,
 never faulted my hazy ways.
 for this I give you my soul,
 hold true and fill the hole.
 i am becomming,
 the me that you know,
 he  never  was around much.
 he stuck his head in a blender,
 twisted his mind and surendered.
 the me that you know,
 he was a mirror.
 now that he's gone,
 come see whats become.
 come and see, the real me

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

stonie’s Poems (29)

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