The following takes place between.....

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    The following takes place between.....

     Poor Jack,
    Running Running Running with time against him,
    Never having time, to eat, to drink to sleep.

    Poor Jack,
    Time has not been kind. Beaten down and scarred,
    His family has fallen beneath him. Never will he know true peace.

    Poor Jack,
    His head cannot contain his grief. If only he had 1 more day.

    Poor Jack.

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    papapaczki commented on The following takes place between.....

    05-28-2009

    Ah yes... imagine if he had that extra day... he could turn the tide of war, solve world hunger, and possibly bring peace to the middle east. Perhaps his daughter's stem cells will give him that next day!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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