The Eye of the Storm

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  • Anger
    • Scorpia
    • trust everyone, get hurt...trust no one, get nothing

    The Eye of the Storm
    Sometimes, I feel not there.
    Floating high above, looking down.
    The confusion, the frenzy,
    I don't feel anything at all.
    I am the calm that holds it together.
    The shrill cries and screams surround me.
    I don't know how I can do it,
    I don't want to be calm,
    I don't want to hear and see,
    I just want to explode.

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    Greekmush commented on The Eye of the Storm

    12-13-2010

    Another good poem structurally---here is a thought. Do this as a shape poem and shape it like a funnel cloud. I would kill off the punctuation at the end of each line also.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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