That Melting Feeling

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    melting, dying horrible...all the breakup feelings of a typical high school teenage girl :P

    That Melting Feeling

     

    That Melting Feeling

    on the verge of collapsing
    i'm falling to the ground
    i thought you would always love me
    i'm numb enough to die
    this zombie-like feeling
    is getting to my head
    it's just one guy
    let's give it another try
    i won't fall as hard again

     

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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