Notions

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    Notions

    This's feeling's
    got me reeling
    got me
    s
    p
    e
    e
    d
    i
    n
    g
    for a ticket

    click it
            check it
                      book it
                              cook it
    that's just the
    w
    o
    m
    a
    n
    '
    s
    place

    screw you
                 i'm cool
                           i'm down
                                     while you d
                                                   r
                                                   o
                                                   w
                                                   n in a pool
    déjà vu
             you're a tool
                              you're a fool
                                              i'm just too cool for you
    so get l
             o
             s
             t

    you wont't be f
                       o
                       u
                       n
                       d

    see you next time around

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    Viper89 commented on Notions

    03-12-2011

    I like the poem but the vertical words is a little hard to read. You might want to consider changing it, unless it was meant to convey the way you felt while writing this poem like a bar graph, then I totally understand why!
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