Take me to the next level

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    Take me to the next level
    TAKE ME TO THE NEXT LEVEL


    Take me to the next level ….
    I beg you!

    I yearn to learn more …
    So teach me what to do…

    I need you to reach me where no other man can.

    Leave me no option…
    Neither question nor confusion that I once had.

    Take me to the next level …
    I beg you!

    Let me enter your heart, like no other woman ever knew.

    Let me enter your heart without permission…

    Submit to my love without hesitation.

    Take me to the next level…
    I ask you!

    I want to taste the victory
    And share it with YOU!

    Let me stay…
    Never let me go…
    Coz there …there in your heart, I know I belong!

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    nayachiro commented on Take me to the next level

    11-29-2009

    very powerful poem, i like that ! It gripped me and didn't let go. thanks, good poetry for sure.
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    TCpoeboy commented on Take me to the next level

    09-23-2009

    I take it that U are looking for some one to bring U out of the palce U are. Emotionally, physically and spiritually. U all ready have the ability to communicate so all that is left is to find that person that will listen 2 U and understand U. Best wishes on that and keep writing I like reading. I like your style!
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    Qualin commented on Take me to the next level

    07-01-2009

    Looked at your photo again just wanted to say,,,every time your mother threw out the dish pan water she' hit me in the face"!!!
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    Qualin commented on Take me to the next level

    07-01-2009

    everyone is knocking and I am just one more ...hoping for an opening ...to find that open door....with every word written..hoping you will not ignore....all the fellers here ah knocking......we want to hear some more! This one is good keep it up ...I know you would for alot of (us'ssss) Qualin
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    texuslove commented on Take me to the next level

    05-28-2009

    I hope you were trying to sound sexy cause you sure got my attention. Very strong and straight to my..
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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