Sudden Death

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    OK ... this is just a frivolous offering which only an action hero movie enthusiast could appreciate. And then ... only if he's seen the movie. It's about a father saving his daughter and a large auditorium filled with hockey nuts from a band of terrorists. It's kind of a Canadian thing eh?

    Sudden Death

              SUDDEN DEATH

     

    Hollow ‘s the point which the powder will hurl

    It’s game ending cargo to the man in the mask

    Follow  to anoint this un-Heavenly task

    O reaper of sorrow and friend of a churl.

     

    Scrummers collide as the boards slap the air

    And the crowd issues volleys of praise

    All comers beware of the dead it might raise

    When the big hand gets over to there.

     

    Seventeen thousand is the strength in the yell

    All held hostage, but still unaware

    The crosshairs align on the ominous sight

    But it’s power‘s absorbed by the absence of light

    As the good guys fulfill their own prayer.

    Yes .. the lion’s defeated the bear.

     

     

     

     

     


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    Olan01 commented on Sudden Death

    12-07-2010

    Churl is an excellent word and well used in this poem. Long is the argument that a lion can defeat a bear as most say it would be the opposite which make the ending all that more meaningful. Olan.
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    devaamido commented on Sudden Death

    04-06-2010

    And that's about all that is thereSo Nieville, please have chairAnd a beer while you freshen the air For the Portugese guy's life seems so much better fare
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    NevillePark

    12/07/2010

    : )) It is! And there's a world of folks who don't cotton to the likes of the Muscles from Brussels. thanks for the suds dev.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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